求一篇金融方面的英语作文

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advantages of getting a loan from the bank for my studies
助学贷款的好处
i am a college student from a farmer's family in a mountaineous area.a year ago,i was admitted to a famous university.before entering the university,i was told that the necessary expenses during my four years' study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan.my parents had collected all the money there was to collect,including the money borrowed from their relatives,but it was hardly enough to meet the needs.then,good news came that i could resort to the bank for a loan.i thought it was a good idea and so i did it.
my dec**ion was based on the following considerations:
first,with the loan i can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus.
secondly,i don't h**e to depend on my parents who are always worrying about the enormous family expenditure.
thirdly,i will always h**e the pressure upon me which forces me to study the hard way.
fourthly,i h**e to live a very simple life and s**e every coin possible.to sooner liquidate the debt,i sometimes work as a home tutor,sometimes a door-to-door sale**an,sometimes a restaurant waiter.
finally,while doing part-time jobs,i h**e accumulated a lot of social experience,bitter sometimes,sweet occasionally but happy all the time.
i think the above are the advantages the loan from the bank has brought to me.they are beneficial not only to my studies at the university but also to my future career,because i firmly believe in the saying that"harsh life produces a diligent and intelligent man.
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